The Blinded

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Post by ReDeemer » Mon Jun 14, 2004 11:15 pm

I once knew a girl that was blind. Blind from the world, its creatures, loved ones, and the ones that cared. She was not blinded as a physical diability, but of a mental state of mind. Blinded from the truth - the meaning of the truth - and the concequences of not telling it. Blinded of help given out to her, and blinded of her actions alltogether.

Her unconditional love towards another was what had blinded her - Not being able to see the truth kept her emotions flowing in the wrong direction, and those that tryed to get her to see the light in this world were turned away by the blackness that surrounded her eyes.

There was another that was blind too - One that tried to help her in any way that he could. He was blinded by the fact that he could change her feelings - But what turned the tide, was that his blindess of her had shone bright to form the light that was this world - And he too, saw her wondering blindly through this world.

He had made a decision - watching as she wondered through the halls of deciet and shamefullness as she continued to be taken advantaged of by the one that she loved - Taken advantage of her Blindness. He put back on the Mask of Darkness that was overemcumbering the girl, and walked though the darkness to help the girl find herself and take her back into the world of light.

Now that story continues today - To those both seefull and Blinded alike.
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Post by ReDeemer » Sat Jun 19, 2004 7:01 am

With the Mask of Darkness placed upon his face again, the boy set out to find the girl wondering helplessly through the darkness. He had crossed many paths of hurt, deciet, and sorrow and at the same time, paths of trust, friendship, and joy while he made his way to the other side.

The blinded girl had found herself thrown out of anothers love by finding out the truth of what actually kept the two together. For his own profit and pleasure - her love had tricked her into lending her heart out to him - His disguise slipping past her feelings and making them settle into her heart. And that was what she was blinded by.

She had then finally learned, that she was blinded by her love for him. That she gave any and everything that she had in her heart to him and it was chewed up and spit out back at her. Realizing just that she encountered what she had assumed was her love - and demanded the question -

Why?

Her "lover", who at that direct moment, had nothing to say. He said not a word to the girl as she stood there with blinded eyes filled with tears. The boy was right - That by her being blinded by the love she had for him, and giving her heart out to the deamon that was her hearts reason to beat - She caught herself into a nightmare that was beyond her reach of ending.

The deamon that had toyed with her emotions and ripped her soul into pieces was going to be vanquished from the girl entirely - The boy had demanded. Every scream, every punch, every blow and every curse that was given that very day - was delivered by the boy unto the deamon that plagued the girl - And the boy was determined to leave the deamon lifeless in the streets.

And the boy had followed his determination as the deamon layed in a pool of his own blood in front of his own home. But as the boy walked away from his enemy, he watched as the girl still wondered - helpless. So again - the boy continued to follow her, though this time he noticed another that had fallen to the darkness.

His name was Josh - A boy who had also been blinded, but his blindess was only temporary - as it sought to the boy. He had also been concerned of the girl, and offered help the the boy. A smiled had formed onto the boys face - and he hapily agreed.

Josh had known how much the boy loved and cared for the girl - for that if the girl had not changed the boy entirley as a person, and was there for him when his life seemed all but hopefull - the boy would not have been there to relieve the girl of her blindess and take her back into the world of light and reality. Rather if the girl was unimportant to the boy in any means at all...

Then they boy would have thrown away the Mask - rather living his own life than worrying about the girl that had fallen.
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Post by WildCard » Sat Jun 19, 2004 9:00 am

interesting read. a bit dark if i must say though. never figured you for the depressing type stories.
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Post by ReDeemer » Sat Jun 19, 2004 9:03 am

It's what I came up with for a Non-Fictional story based upon myself.

I'll post more soon
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