Fool

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Darkside
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Post by Darkside » Fri Aug 06, 2004 7:11 am

Fool

I don’t know maybe I truly am a fool, I just wanted to get to know you.
I should have followed that one simple rule; to a woman I’m just a tool that is harshly used.
Not for pleasure and not for fun, I’m just the one that swallows the bullet from a gun.
I wish I knew how to get a girl to notice me, it doesn’t seem to work when it’s poetry.
I don’t know how to rhyme; most likely I’m just wasting my time.
Look at me now I’m crying because I know I’ll be all-alone when I’m dying.
A fool is what he’s worth, looked down upon at his birth and is said that he is no good for this earth.


Being depressed helps make good poems. yay!!
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WildCard
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Post by WildCard » Fri Aug 06, 2004 7:15 am

ya know, that's damn good dude, kinda feel like that right now myself
St.Lucifer
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Post by St.Lucifer » Sun Aug 08, 2004 9:27 pm

dont really no what 2 make of it
ill ponder it for a while then get bak 2ya
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