Lifeless Empty Vessel

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Shane
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Post by Shane » Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:07 am

Lifeless Empty Vessel




This is my Lifeless Empty Vessel
it's like a cage that decays around me
numbing my every notion
it is my prison, the vice that grips me to this reality
it's what keeps me going
it's what keeps me down

It distills me
as i race through the idle thoughts of everything i know
i can feel reality caving in on me
getting more numb with each footstep

i cry out for help
but none can hear me
i feel overwhelmed with fear
i'll never have anyone
because i'm forever alone
entwined by this cold hopeless void

this fine line between reality and figmentation dissapates
as i lay there in a vat of my own solitary
i cant help but to observe everything racing through my mind
caving in around me
fading into it's own dissolution
i feel diluted
the world is animated around me as i know it
soundless

all i can do
is encapsulate the broken shards of glass once more
none can hear me
so it just simply is

and it's all for nothing
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Post by Wulf » Tue Jan 04, 2005 10:54 pm

nice work dude.. i love your use of words...

"this fine line between reality and figmentation dissapates
as i lay there in a vat of my own solitary"

is thanks
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Post by Shane » Tue Jan 04, 2005 11:25 pm

haha, glad you like dude :)
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